http://aline-daryen.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] aline-daryen.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] omi_ohmy 2012-05-19 07:59 am (UTC)

Really, I like this more and more. The scene at the Malfoy's was very powerful, the nervous, nasty atmosphere made me want to help Draco too. Usually, Harry is less interesting than Draco in fanfic, but yours is different and I can easily get into his way of thinking, so it reads well.
Going to the next chapter now!

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